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https://youtu.be/bkTuoGhbCSs (Cheetah) Wow! What is that? A massive cheetah. But why is he coming closer? I think he likes licking me.While he was licking me, I saw his big, long, shiny teeth. with his slimy, gooey tongue twisting like a mermaid in the sea. Suddenly...slam!! the cheetah ran away like he is beating the bullet of a gun. Bam!!! Ging Pi https://youtu.be/JIhCNbdIFT4 (Bear Slap) Our story takes place on a damp desolate beach with two bears roaming the landscape. One of them wanders off into another side whilst the other one wanders towards the place of our vision. It walks closer and closer until it… Kurtis https://youtu.be/kFa3x13d5Co (Humpback Whale) I’m swimming with my Mother. We’re like the unicorns of the sea. I watch my Mother jump and flip into the cool clear blue water. Now it was my turn. Here … I … go. I jump over the water twisting in mid - air. Suddenly time stops! Then I’m back in the water. Ever since that day I never understood how that happened. But that was my first jump. Lee Alone in the sea! Only two whales. Do you know who? Who else? Me and my mother. I was swimming around and learning. But you know what I was actually doing? I was annoying my own mother. She was getting pretty angry. But you know what before she yelled it me she said, ”I will teach you how to do a backflip better.” So she went right down to the bottom of the sea and swam right up. Then she did an amazing backflip. I love my mum because she is a great teacher. Stephanie Going out into the open sea with my mum and I. We found a good spot to swim. There was no island and it was super clean. I started to flap my tail and dive up and down in the spring water. Then I felt the cold fresh air blowing on my back and the cold water on my tummy. Then I saw a bright sunny sun shining all over the sea - shimmering and shining. Then my mum started to dive down into the water and out she came doing a big dive, turning around on her tummy and back into the water. That was so much fun. Anna
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